Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.
parents play the vital role in people's life .they can not turn blind eye to their importance so it is irrefutable to say that today parents are very much busy with their occupation and they do not spend their precise time with their offsprings so i agree with this notions.
The foremost factor to note is that in present pragmatic scenario inflation is increasing frequently like running water therefore people are busy for earning more and more money due to which they do not pay attention on their children. Moreover, technology is also cause of this problem such as people are expand their time with gadgets for playing games or using social sites. consequently, children do not get chance for share their feelings or emotions and sometimes they slip in bad society .
However , in a period of time parents were very much care for nurturing of their children and also they had no greed of money as they satisfied with square meal of days . As a result people got together with their family members and ate together .Besides this , gone are the days when people gave moral values to their children and juvenile respect them with their hurt .While, in current days children do not get attention their parents because of that they become victim of isolate.
To conclude it is rested that, these days people have mania of making mony they dont spend their time with their chil . However , in a past time people always keep an eye their children and spend time so parents should give time to their children .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76335877863 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27548165885 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4552963397 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383736252943 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202474057442 0.084324248473 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804977881945 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266946042564 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523101918822 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.