It is often argued that, gone are the days, when children was the center attraction of parents love. But, in present day and age, due to working lifestyles, parents have less time for their children. It has always been a question, why children get neglected? It has become a matter of concern worldwide. I am certainly agree with the given statement, and my viewpoints will be justified in the subsequent paragraphs.
At the outset, due to numerous considerations, it can be agreed that, progeny's are bearing the consequences of modern working lifestyles.
Primarily, unquenchable desires of family members are responsible for this. Parents become workaholic to compete the demands of their children, resulting both are unable to spend quality time with each other. Another reason, which is also responsible for this problem is that majority of parents forget to draw the line between their professional, and family obligations. This is due to the fact that, in order to compete the work assignments, family commitments are put aside by parents. Thus, lack of time, and separation of work and responsibilities push the people to devote less time to their children.
Correspondingly, formation of nuclear families are also responsible for occurrence of this situation. In the past, children got love from their grandparents, wheather parents did work or not. Whereas in these days, shadow of grandparents love is also absent. This is due to the fact that, more parents are working, and they are unable to cater to the needs of old parents, resulting send them in age care centers. Therefore, children suffer badly, and do not get proper attention from family members.
In conclusion, it is sensible to say that as unquenchable desires, inseparation of professional and personal duties, and absence of grandparents love are the key reasons, due to which children do not get proper attention. It is recommended that, it would be propitious to make harmonious balance between work, and spend quality time with children to feel them, not only secure, but also, loved.
- Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.Why is this the case?What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people? 67
- Nowadays people normally stretch their work hours and get stressed than before What are the reasons for this What employers can do to make people s life easier 84
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.Do you agree or disagree? 67
- "Some say it is important for parents to teach their children about the importance of money. Why and how should they do it? Include examples from your own experience". 73
- Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99643212506 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555223880597 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.638102051 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329933285061 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104496941245 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930826792232 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176003958067 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831086852252 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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