In modern society, fashion is becoming more and more popular in people’s choice of clothes. Why? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?
Nowadays, in the fast-paced life, fashion is sharply impressive to the citizens, particularly among the youngsters. As a result, there is widespread concern about the impacts of fast fashion on individuals' choices. From my perspective, I believe that the negative effects of this are rapidly escalating and need to be solved instantly. The reasons for this are going to be illustrated in my essay.
Firstly, it is obvious that the fast fashion phenomenon is caused by the swift modernization which is useful to the citizens to access easily to international advertisements or trends. In addition, sponsorship advertisements in which the celebrities endorse a certain fashion trend are attracting numerous exposures and sway consumers to purchase impulsively. Furthermore, thank the development of social media, there is a rapidly increasing in fulfilling one's peacockery by showing off their wearing.
Subsequently, the popularity of fashionable clothes among the people, specifically, the youngsters leads to fade the of traditional values. The soul and character's beauty of a person, for example, are gradually replaced by superficial beauty. As a result, people's values are judged by their appearances which is totally improper. Additionally, following the celebrities' fashion trends which are extremely expensive poses a financial burden on the young generation. This causes the escalation in credit loans among the youngsters. the well-known brands such as Nike, Gucci, etc, for example, have launched the fashion products which cost a young officer's salary for a year. Besides, disposing of tons of clothes in the environment has led to an extremely serious pollution situation.
However, it is not ignored that fast fashion has played a crucial role in creating more working opportunities and a way for people to identify themself and reflect their characters and senses in aesthetics. In fact, the disadvantages have outweighed relatively the advantages.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e is a rapidly increasing in fulfilling ones peacockery by showing off their wearing...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...n in credit loans among the youngsters. the well-known brands such as Nike, Gucci, ...
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cters and senses in aesthetics. In fact, the disadvantages have outweighed relati...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59731543624 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26293236597 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.138438154 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1388690929 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363881769443 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314991327462 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751145929348 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166531101723 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e is a rapidly increasing in fulfilling ones peacockery by showing off their wearing...
^^^^
Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...n in credit loans among the youngsters. the well-known brands such as Nike, Gucci, ...
^^^
Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cters and senses in aesthetics. In fact, the disadvantages have outweighed relati...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59731543624 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26293236597 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.138438154 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1388690929 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363881769443 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314991327462 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751145929348 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166531101723 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.