In modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face to face contract with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?
We are living in the world in which a single day can not imagine without internet. People all over the world are spontaneously using internet to buy goods, perform tasks and make communications with no physical contract. It is often argued whether using internet excessively is beneficial or harmful. However, I strongly believe that using internet has tremendous benefits because it can improve productivity of an organization and save valuable time of customers.
First of all, internet increases the productivity of the people, especially staffs and employees. When employees perform their tasks by using internet, they can communicate with colleagues and share the updated information, which executives use to make profitable decisions. Besides, if a company allows employees work from home, then it can save the fixed costs, which result higher amount of revenues. Moreover, employees would accomplish their tasks eagerly and rapidly, when they have flexibility to work from homes. For example, Google and Alibaba offers employees the opportunities work from their homes, resulting millions of profit because of rising of outputs. That is why companies can improve productivity by using internet.
Secondly, while shopping, internet saves precious time of the consumers. As people do not need to visit shopping mall for purchasing products, they can avoid traffic congestion. Furthermore, online shopping gives wide rage of products, which are arranged in the shelves with specific features and prices. For instance, many bookstores and cloth selling companies in Bangladesh offer wide varieties of products in online so that customers do not stuck in traffic jams in order to reach shopping malls. Hence, shopping via internet ultimately saves the important times of consumers.
In conclusion, internet has been widely using for placing order of goods, performing professional works etc. Though some believe that internet has negative aspects, I strongly believe and think that it is worthy to use internet because of increasing productivity and saving time of people.
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| 2019-12-15 | gurkiran05 | 56 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Raji Hasan | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e updated information, which executives use to make profitable decisions. Besides, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60252365931 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87863488917 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4444991363 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.470588235 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156376296845 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564892749728 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400214291556 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101899507185 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347565411583 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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