In the modern world, the society is become more and more develop, we can now live without any face-to-face interaction with other people.While making modern life more convenient in some ways, the situation causes a negative trend in the development momentum of the current society.
There is no denying that the internet brings many benefit things in some aspects. First, People can easily communicate with each other through social networking sites, typically during the covid-19 pandemic, people are not allowed to leave their homes, every society as a pastime helps them entertain themselves. as well as news updates. Second, it also plays a very important part in student learning, teachers can put out exercises on pages or groups to help students easily receive and complete them and then send them back to their teachers.Moreover, the internet has many other benefits too.
Contrary to the point of view mentioned above, in my opinion the disadvantage it causes is still quite large.To begin with, the human beings nowadays are losing direct interactions with others.For instance, offspring spend less time talking to their parents because they are too busy with social media or playing game,etc.Therefore,this not only destroys family affection but also harms health. It damages the eyes, slows the child's development with their ages.Furthermore, a virtual world without human interaction has lots of harm. People gradually lose connection with each other, the human become lonely,they are like robots without feelings and emotions.
In conclusion, living without and face to face contact with society has positive growth for the reason of convenience. However, it has negative development since it may lead to mental health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42647058824 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96989654149 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.93405394 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.6 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.7 7.06120827912 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368856902083 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128987892821 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110019476064 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226039211217 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939253201576 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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