In the modern world many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams What are the main causes of this problem What are the effects of the lack of such skills Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you

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In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Being in the modern and developing era, many a person lack soft skills; for example communication and teamwork skills when working in an enterprise. In my opinion, there are two main causes leading to the human resources with low quality of social experience, which are strongly emphasizing educational degrees and lack of practical training since childhood. As a result, the effect can be that the work performance is not guaranteed, leading to the downturn of the business in the future.

It is obvious that excellent soft skills could be considered as one of the crucial pathways to success in the career-success, especially negotiation and teamwork. However, the young generation nowadays has too much focus on theoretical knowledge because they think that a high level of academics may help show their ability to work and earn a high salary in the future. For more details, most of the children spend all their time for studying but forget to take part in outdoor activities in order to consolidate their social skills. Continuing to state the point for the other reason, the educational programs in our country maybe have no target on functional actions; hence, there are almost no subjects or training courses that direct students to build social skills in schools from primary to high school.

In addition, to begin with the business side, having staff members with unqualified communicative and teamwork abilities can considerably affect business not only internal cycle working but also external relationships. For instance, an employee with poor presentation expertise cannot help customers understand the products and convey them on purchasing that product. Therefore, the revenue of the company will significantly drop and have no outstanding performance compared to other competitors in the market. Furthermore, the unacceptable quality of working in teams will not contribute to the cohesion of departments in the company; based on this, all of the issues cannot be solved efficiently and seriously affect working procedures.

In conclusion, I could admit that reality experience such as negotiation and work-in-a-team is rapidly essential in today's enterprise environment. Exaggerating the possibilities of qualifications and lack of real-world experience has brought out the generation that lacks soft skills. As a consequence, there have negative results on the overall company performance and a loss of competitive advantage in the market.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 652, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...artments in the company; based on this, all of the issues cannot be solved efficiently and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48293963255 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1264459045 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9047354791 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.214285714 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2142857143 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222154406807 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676711380439 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660130649173 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128388187003 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571218117895 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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