In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that children can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The internet, with its vast information, nowadays plays such a significant role in our modern society. Children benefit much from this, especially when they require effective studying at home. Therefore, some people believe that schools are no longer essential. Personally, I strongly disagree with this notion since schools provide a superior setting for learning compared to the online approach of studying at home.
Firstly, children’s focus and discipline will be maintained well by schools. It could be challenging for a child to experiment and opt for the accurate resources to acquire amid the abundant information available. With their hyperactive ages, children, for instance, may divert their attention toward enjoyable and fascinating things such as video games, cartoons,... when they are unable to discover the appropriate knowledge. Additionally, parents face difficulties keeping track of their kids due to the distractions directly impacting kids at home. As a result, studying at schools under the immediate supervision of teachers will enhance children’s concentration and discipline.
Secondly, schools create a solid competitive environment to assist children in identifying and growing their abilities comprehensively. As I see it, when children go to school, they usually strive for high grades or rankings, so that they can easily understand their strengths and weaknesses. On the other hand, children tend to form relationships and learn a lot from friends. These peers always provide straightforward and simpler explanations, contrary to the complex and highly specialized solutions found from the internet.
In conclusion, despite the myriad merits of the internet in homeschooling, I am convinced that schools are still crucial to help children maintain focus, discipline and develop themselves in a healthy competitive place.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he online approach of studying at home. Firstly, children’s focus and discipline...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ing things such as video games, cartoons,... when they are unable to discover the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79927007299 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21635566912 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671532846715 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3241925377 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226906561388 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691852174301 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452567484268 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127464608355 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603307774462 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he online approach of studying at home. Firstly, children’s focus and discipline...
^^^
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ing things such as video games, cartoons,... when they are unable to discover the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79927007299 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21635566912 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671532846715 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3241925377 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226906561388 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691852174301 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452567484268 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127464608355 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603307774462 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.