More and more animal species are becoming extinct by human activities in land and sea. What are the reasons? How to solve?
The extinction of many animal species caused by human exploitation has become a concerning matter nowadays. There are several reasons for this severe problem. However, a few solutions could be taken to tackle this issue.
To begin with, two main reasons could be accounted for the vanishing of wild animals by human activities. This first reason is that the demanding of fresh meat supply is increasing daily due to the development of food industry. Since the products made of meat have increased to an uncountable number, private companies need to deal with animal hunters to get more supply. Thus, it will lead to the decreasing in number of animal species. The second reason is that the trend of killing wild lives for entertainment is currently popular in a particular group of people. For instance, many successful entrepreneurs or politicians like to spend their leisure time in the weekends to hunt wild animals, which will also damage the amount of the existing species.
Fortunately, two method could be taken to deal with the aforementioned behaviors of human. Firstly, the governments could enact laws that restrict the mass production of meat, which consequently prevents the over-exploitation on animals. For example, Vietnamese Congress has established a law that forced food companies to use other alternative materials by only allowing to use under 100 tons of fresh meat a year. Secondly, educating people to recognize the importance of wild lives should also be considered. This could be achieved by pushing more lessons in schools or investing in advertisement.
In conclusion, human activities are indeed having a bad impact on the lives of existing animal species for a few reasons. However, several solutions could be considered to face this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25964912281 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97673341572 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1246006369 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167081374691 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561769748507 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652513353594 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111160996309 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422354845849 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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