The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that public transport service should be established non-stop and free of charge in order to address the problem of traffic jams. While providing public transport is important, I completely disagree with the idea that governments should open this service 24 hours a day everyday to deal with traffic congestion.
To begin with, offering the public transport for free and running the service without rest do not really impact the traffic jams. Even when people are free to use these transports to travel, they still prefer their personal vehicles because they feel uncomfortable sitting next to strangers. Since people still like to drive their own cars, the problem of traffic congestion will not be solved. The idea of keeping the service unstopped is also not solving this problem because almost traffic jams occur during the day not at night. In addition, the only advantage to offer the service 24 hours per day is to reduce travelling accidents at night but it is not related to this discussing topic.
On the other hand, there are several solutions that governments around the world can take to deal with traffic jams. Firstly, they need to spread the density of vehicles by building more roads, opening more highways and constructing multi-level road system. By doing this, the flow of travelling of both public and private transport will not be blocked and thus, reduce traffic jams. Secondly, governments can enact laws to restrict individuals from owning too many vehicles. Reports show that Vietnam traffic jams have been reduced significantly after the congress establish the law to forbid the possession of more than 2 cars in each family.
In conclusion, while public transport is a good way to deal with traffic jams, I believe that opening the service for free and non-stop has nothing to deal with the problem of traffic congestion. Instead, governments can take a few other solution to tackle this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...should open this service 24 hours a day everyday to deal with traffic congestion. To ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.103125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57018474227 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1786290942 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291647331097 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999839624244 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671410313732 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189892085204 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667183829334 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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