More and more companies are allowing employee to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development
We are already in industrialization era where many organizations are inventing a lot of type of measure that they can apply it into their work circumstances. Therefore, more companies have a tendency to permit their employees to work at home. I strongly believe their method will bring a buoyant development to their workers.
Firstly, by working at each employee house I believe it can boost up workers work. Moreover, their house circumstances are more likely to have better vibe rather than their workplace, because support from family while we work at home are feeling more soothing rather than in their office. In addition, there was a survey conducted by Professor Thomas Abigail from Harvard University. He asked many workers on his house circumstances to participate in his survey and the result is 65% of them are feeling more comfortable working at their own house, and 25% of them are feeling more comfy working at their workplace. While the remaining 10% say that they are having fun in both places.
Secondly, due to the fact that work in office can bring pressure and many kinds of unwell feelings. Therefore, many employees will accept the offer from their boss to work at their home because they can feel more relax and can work properly as they should. In addition, we can use our own measure to solve our work task. For example; I have a nephew he is a programmer and currently he is a part of a famous programming office in USA. He always sit in front of his laptop every time he work and he never come to the office because he feel uncomfortable with the situation.
All in all, working at our own house can bring many merits. But it is depend on each individuals
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... more comfy working at their workplace. While the remaining 10% say that they are hav...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sits'.
Suggestion: sits
...us programming office in USA. He always sit in front of his laptop every time he wo...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
... he never come to the office because he feel uncomfortable with the situation. A...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the office because he feel uncomfortable with the situation. All in all, worki...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... house can bring many merits. But it is depend on each individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73310810811 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70166998851 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8118532998 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224296156381 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083914333099 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976695299024 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145470564115 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581597054924 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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