Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is well said that we are already in modern era, where we can easily search for things that we need for daily activities. Moreover, many people argue that nowadays human kinds are having more tendency to have many options. I strongly believe that I have same view about the statement that say we have too many options.
To start with, people don't know what is the most vital things that they need. Therefore, humans often makes too many options to choose. For example; I have a friend of mine his name is Ballot, currently he is studying in Ignatius Global School as eleven grader. He often made too many choices such as; what kind of shoes that he need to buy or even his ideal type of woman are always changing everyday and then he realized he need to manage his choices carefully and properly.
The next, humans are always demanding more items. In addition, it is not because they can afford to buy it or not but they have higher self-esteem therefore, they always find many measures in order to make choices and accomplish it. Furthermore, there was a research conducted by a group of sociology students from University of Oklahoma involving adult men and women. From the research we can found that almost 100% of women are have more tendency to make many choices they even don't know can't accomplish it or not while, men are neutral.
All in all, we need to concerned it again before making too many choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6062992126 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30252700381 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5868346103 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268327966957 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100677114786 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783561760231 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159512037344 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782571170421 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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