Some people think that children should start primary school as soon as possible,while others believe they should start school after reaching 7 years old.To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is well said that children must go to primary school as fast as possible, on the other side others think that children should start school after reaching 7 years old. I strongly believe that I have different view about the statement and I will provide my opinions about it.
To begin with, we need to train children behaviour before applying to primary school because if the children don't behave as properly as possible I believe this aspect will interrupt children learning process. Moreover, there is a research conducted by a team consisting of sociology students from Monash University. They said children that were forced to enter school earlier than others have more tendency to ignore school lessons and regulations. In addition, we must watch over our children behaviour until they are mature enough to go to school.
The next, we don't need to be hurry we can wait until our children are ready to participate in school life because if we persuade them to go earlier there might be a chance where children cannot understand the whole materials at school because their capability to learn is still low and need to be train a lot. For example; there is a case in Indonesia when this child has already graduated from kindergarden with low score and low ability to read or even write. His mother wanted to register her son immediately to primary school, because she thought that if her son can finish his education faster than usual he can be magnificently successful in the future. In fact, her son cannot learn and concentrate at school, therefore he need to postpone his primary school.
To conclude, we must be careful before making decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97833935018 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65924606244 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5122868162 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273187578738 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103586655592 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122851664128 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164742861473 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131546444369 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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