Increasing number of newly married couples are making the commitment not to have babies. Some think that this is purely due to their selfishness, while others think that this tendency has high moral intentions, such as ever increasing population and liking to be independent. This essay agrees that young couples’ do not like to give birth to a baby solely due to selfish facts such as convenience and finances.
Bringing up a child is not an easy task. Parents are responsible for everything of their offspring from nutrition to education. This needs scarifying of young parents’ lifestyle, such as sleep, hobbies and leisure time. In addition to that raising a child needs a lot of money, which they do not want to spend on kids. Currently, instead of having kids, young adults maintain a comfortable lifestyle and budget their finances to achieve academic, professional and entertainment goals. That is solely being selfish. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford university, in which they claim that 97% of women aged 25 to 30 do not need to be conceived in order to achieve their personal targets.
However, some individuals believe that these couples are equipped with high moral qualities, what prevent them from having children. Among those reasons, it is believed to be expanding global population; however, in Oxford study, at least one girl was not concern about controlling birth-rate. Not only do they not bother about increasing population, but they do not concern about their independence. If they really need freedom, they should not got married either.
In conclusion, the number of couples who do not want kids are on the rise. Some people think that it reflects their selfishness, while others claim that it is due to moral values. This essay agrees with the former point of view and explains why those couples do not scarify their convenience and money to raise children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, while, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06940063091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7353268464 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2486135582 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239459432226 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764761620902 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532720828552 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156356766624 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055775212857 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.