More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introduced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?
Numerous metropolitan areas around the world have extensively implemented approaches to improve the safety of residents, which is being threatened by the elevated crime rate. In my opinion, the detrimental impacts of this strategy are more significant than the possible advantages it brings.
The first negative effect from this method is that it may weaken the national economy. Specifically, safety procedures necessitate the additional allocation of equipment as well as the involved labor force. This can lead to a growth in government expenditure, which is mostly generated by tax levies on citizens. For instance, an increase in the number of police patrols requires a greater budget for officer salaries, operational vehicles, and weapons.
Another adverse consequence of the improved level of security is the inconvenience for residents. Indeed, as the safety measures become more complicated, citizens must regularly comply with a wider range of regulations. For example, upon entering buildings, employees must form a queue to go through a scanning device to ensure that there are no illegal items brought into the premises. As a result, this could add extra time to accomplish everyday tasks for individuals.
Admittedly, there are still several advantageous outcomes emerging from this strategy, chief among which is the reduced level of crime. This is because the increased level of precautionary measures makes it more challenging for possible offenders to commit transgressions, thus deterring them from performing those acts. Ultimately, the number of crimes can be decreased in urban areas.
In conclusion, many large urban regions have increasingly imposed methods to raise the safety level for their residents. Personally, I believe that the possible downsides, including the heavier financial burden for governments and the inconvenience for citizens, prevail over the benefits such as reduced crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6678200692 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07299945179 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653979238754 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7045864527 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183456325019 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550858376083 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053016012326 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986925880536 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468474550197 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.