more and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime.
Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks ?
A huge amount of actions have been enacted to fix security better as per of growing case offences in the city. Although those measures would cut some potential crime, sometimes, it might be limiting the productive time for some employee.
Improving safety living, freely from criminals, is totally beneficial for society. BY putting hidden public cameras in the vulnerable places, far from central cities, such as at some dark blocks would dip the number of offenders committing crimes, besides positioning police officers on the street also show the same advantageous impact. This is because criminals will be conscious due to cameras or police existence, then they must be afraid of being caught if commit a crime. A similar initiative in Shanghai, China, resulted in a 10% decreased in street crime in 2015.
Nevertheless, this issue also has the demerits impact on cutting out working time due to curfew rules. By enacting that regulation, many cities have succeeded to decline the proportion of crime at night. The result, however, also cut productive hours for some people as they start to work at night usually such as sales promotion officers. About 1 million SPG (Sales Promotion Girl) protested against curfew rules in Saudi Arabia in 1990, with the reason that they were unable to complete daily target.
To conclude, developing any measures, as the impact of crime growing upper, are needed to make sure people in the urban area feel secure. Based some statement above, the positive impact of this issue is wider, which can be more worthwhile for almost societies, compared to the negative side of this implication, that only matter in some group of societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ave been enacted to fix security better as per of growing case offences in the cit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10909090909 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57598829626 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665454545455 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.311932295 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119844970132 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407581081464 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345566484255 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715894896391 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395016500284 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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