Nowadays, The crime rate is increasing day by day in urban areas and the government is introducing the strict techniques for reducing it. In many countries, the government installs CCTV cameras in the whole of streets in urban areas. They also make strictness in police patrolling at night and they also collect the digital data of every person living on this earth.
If I talk about CCTV cameras there are drawbacks to the security of people living in urban areas. For instance, a person does not feel better under living a visual control as someone is seeing him/her whole the time. They do not get as freedom as they need. They think like they are living in jail.
Whereas. CCTV cameras also help in reducing crime rates in urban areas. As criminal get panic of recorded in camera and get catch by police easily. For example, if a thief wants to do the crime anywhere he/she could be seen by police and get cached.
The government also introduce strict laws for police patrolling at night in streets in urban areas. Because of this also criminal rates go down in the streets of urban areas.
On the flip side, the most important measures that the government introduced in the whole of the world is taking of digital data of every person on this earth. By the birth of the baby until the end of a person's life. For example, if the police get any fingerprints in any crime they a get his/her whole biodata by restoring from digital data stored.
To conclude, The government is taking harsh measures to avoid the crime rate in their country. So, It is shown that the benefits of these measures overweight their harms.
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- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
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- more and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... every person living on this earth. If I talk about CCTV cameras there are dra...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...think like they are living in jail. Whereas. CCTV cameras also help in reducing cri...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing at night in streets in urban areas. Because of this also criminal rates go down in ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...he birth of the baby until the end of a persons life. For example, if the police get an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67013888889 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36076130987 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461805555556 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.397677229 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1176470588 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161427062593 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570975975455 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488545167361 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890899726635 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337400194292 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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