More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a common belief that the solution is to rise the cost of fast food spend for people become extremely overweight. While I understand why some people agree with this view, I still disagree with this for several reasons.
Those who believe that the fattening foods should be increase cost may have several arguments. Perhaps one of is that overweight person can not buy a lot of such this food. For instance, when people see too high fast food, they will save money not buy this food. Therefore, this help balanced-social in daylife and reduces overweight person. Another point is that they save money to buy other necessities. It is true that, people cost balance between fattening foods and healthy food.
Nevertheless, I would argue that the fastfood should not grow cost because of several reasons. Chief among these is that make fast food items depreciate. It is true that fast food stores will not sell when this fast food be push the rise. As a result, people afraid to buy this items. Another reason worth mentioning is that people abstain fast food to lose weight. In fact, people see the fast food too high then they won't buy then that they will buy healthy food. As a result, overweight person eat many healthy food which good for health and lose weight help they body purification.
In conclusion, despite acknownledging the logic of the advocates, I still side with those who disagree with the view fast food shoud not be increase.
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- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increased'?
Suggestion: increased
...ieve that the fattening foods should be increase cost may have several arguments. Perhap...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rise. As a result, people afraid to buy this items. Another reason worth mentioning ...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much healthy food', 'a good deal of healthy food'.
Suggestion: much healthy food; a good deal of healthy food
...ood. As a result, overweight person eat many healthy food which good for health and lose weight h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79365079365 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43954363393 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9499498997 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243390687209 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094465000194 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594750520015 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164390104761 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081781870873 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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