More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that an increasing number of individuals get overweight severely in today's society. To a certain extent, some believe that raising the price of fatty meals is a viable option. However, I also think that authorities, companies, schools should be involved in introducing breaks for exercise or outdoor activities for workers and students.
There are two main reasons why increasing the price of fattening foods will be a proper solution. One reason is that many people nowadays rely on fast food or pre-prepared meals and a proportion of youngsters have grown up on a diet of convenience foods as they are cheap to buy and very easy to prepare. Therefore, governments are going to solve this issue by making the cost of those foods higher, meanwhile, slightly reduce organic, healthy sustenance prices. Furthermore, it will make people do not want to buy it so often and try to get used to eating fresh foods instead. As a result, they will realize how this new diet changes their lives, for example, they will have a fit figure, they will face fewer diseases than before, their sleep routines will also be benefited from it, etc.
Apart from the practical positive effects expressed above, I believe that this is not really enough to get people to stay away from junk foods or stop gaining weight since it also needs practice and time to completely switch their mindset into a new one. Firstly, companies should implement exercise breaks for employees. To illustrate, staffs work 8 hours per day will have about 1 hour off to relax, have lunch and take a short nap. While sitting at the same place and watching television, they should get up and run or walk around the office to enjoy nature, the peaceful atmosphere at their own workplace. Secondly, schools need to have more extracurricular activities for students to participate in so that they will not be addicted to playing games or scoring some Facebook posts.
In conclusion, for the reason I have mentioned above, my firm conviction is that raising fat food products prices is a realistic choice. Moreover, facilities for work and study should be active in tackling this problem because a sedentary lifestyle is likely prone to obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9064171123 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66614010668 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6489442689 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163645986428 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563398164925 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476109477882 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933474461975 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328040806046 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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