More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As being obese is becoming a serious problem lately, some are of the thought that a price hike on unhealthy foods will help to tackle this issue. I tend to disagree with this argument, as I believe that there are other several ways in addressing this problem.
To begin with, although increasing the prices of fast foods will somehow help to deter some people away from purchasing it, creating awareness through public education should be taken into account for. With this, it will help the public to be more aware and understand the danger of consuming too much food that are high in fat and salt content. This, in turn, will prevent more people from eating too much of such unhealthy food. Moreover, public education can also create an awareness towards the fast food chain owners in preparing a much healthier options for everyone. As a result, the public will then be able to enjoy a much healthier diet and thus curbing the issue of obesity.
Furthermore, a regular exercise routine should also be considered in one’s daily life. This is because consuming a healthy diet alone does not help one to keep fit. It is encouraged for everyone to at least exercise three times a week to be healthy and fit. For instance, someone who eats healthily but does not exercise can still gain weight due to the energy consumed not being burn. Therefore, it is beneficial to exercise regularly as it can prevent one from health issues including being overweight.
In conclusion, even though price hike on fast food can discourage people from buying, it does not help in reducing obesity in the society. Therefore, it is my belief that increasing awareness through public education and engaging in various exercises is more efficient in addressing the issue of overweight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54536223093 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1985369729 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230461500739 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849805264611 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793547543029 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154390199429 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083773199721 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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