More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and making time to exercise regularly. Why and what can we do to encourage this?
In our fast-paced world, it is such a tough task to stay healthy since everyone always seems to be in a rush, which leads them to eat junk foods. However, there is a significant increase in the number of people who work out daily and consume organic products. In this essay, I will discuss some specific reasons behind this lifestyle and suggest ways to encourage others.
As we all know, "the greatest wealth is health." Physical health is of utmost importance, therefore, humans should take care of it as much as possible. A strong immune system can be built by eating healthily and exercising regularly. In this busy life, people not only have physical but also mental health issues. Undoubtedly, organic foods provide lots of essentials to the body. Besides it, training every day does help one to get better sleep, which is good for inner health. The fear of obesity and depression is another possible reason for this lifestyle. It is quite clear that an excessive intake of fast food and a lack of workouts would cause these problems.
With the development of technology, people can obtain plenty of information about the advantages of this wholesome lifestyle. Consequently, more people would be induced to do research about fitness and nutrition facts. Furthermore, the government can encourage citizens to follow this trend by spreading the drawbacks of consuming junk foods and not exercising on a regular basis. Last but not least, it is reasonable to ban foods that cause fatal damage to the human body. When such products are unavailable, people would tend to shift towards a balanced meal.
To sum up, a healthy diet and daily workouts could bring numerous benefits to our life. In my opinion, the awareness of this lifestyle should be spread wider without hesitation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03344481605 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70385980043 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6740794116 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253121984358 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656309400055 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514553384657 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129865251995 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739871729425 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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