More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive or negative development.
In this day and age, the demand of wearing fashionable clothes is proliferating by leaps and bounds at global scale. It is stated that number of proponents believe that it become imperative to wear fashionable clothes. This essay will discuss the negative impact of development.
To embark on, in the present scenario wearing fashionable clothes cultivate numerous issues for individuals such as it wastage large amount of money as well as their precious time while looking at various variety of clothes in the market. Moreover, people spent a lot of time in in their phones on online shops where they exhaust their time and currency. If, multitudes spend abundance of wealth on stylish outfits, it would not be conducive for them. For instance in 2018 a survey showed that 70% masses fritter away on modern costumes and spent money like play ducks and drakes. Thus spending money and time on attire have negative effects on masses and tradition.
However, in modern era showing more curiosity towards designer outfits ruin the local culture. If, mobs show interest in western clothes, it would not beneficial for culture. Nowadays masses tend to wear western attire instead of wearing cultural costumes. To illustrate, a survey revealed that in India, demand of western outfits grew to 90% in sales and they not tend to present their passion towards their own culture apparel such as kurta pajama. Hence, trend of to be dressed in popular garments is not favourable approach.
To sum up, although showing attitude to wear trendy attire ruin local culture and waste the time and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, moreover, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08745247148 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49631282693 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4888070795 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227654638308 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724220201211 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722241801909 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141578209405 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852755761801 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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