More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It seems true that the movement of population from rural regions to urban ones in pursuit of better lives has become increasingly common. In fact, this trend has led to certain drawbacks for city life, and I can identify two remedies which governments can use to address these issues fully.
Perhaps the most widely-observed disadvantage of residing in cities is the prohibitively expensive costs of renting or buying houses, which may stem from the ever-rising urban sprawl. This can be seen in many large Asian cities such as Bangkok where such prices have witnessed a gradually upward trend over the past two decades. Another difficulty would be the harsh competition among job seekers, especially for uneducated migrants. This tends to be the result of the considerably increased number of such people, which seems to outweigh the quantity of available job positions.
Regarding possible solutions, probably the most immediate remedy would be to reduce the migratory flow to certain extent by improving the rural economy. In fact, this can be for the governments to encourage more investments in rural industry by imposing lower taxes on companies which create employment in such areas. Another further long-term step may be to build more affordable and social accommodation in suburbs and to promote the use of public transport simultaneously. This can allow residents to afford their housing, yet to be able to commute long distances for work daily, thus lowering the population’s density in inner cities.
In conclusion, the migration from countryside to cities tend to create more job competition and to make the housing costs become intolerably high. However, governments’ actions such as introducing proper economic policies and having more effective urban planning may enhance the quality of life for all city inhabitants.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39655172414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02051841744 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.8051270018 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292671602059 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973746897576 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630165243313 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182789322132 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623324963415 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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