Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?
It is often said that raising funds to aid the community plays a vitally important role in society nowadays. It is believed that everyone needs to spend a certain amount of their earnings helping other people. Personally, I completely agree with this statement, and I will explain why in this essay.
It seems that money raised can help the community considerably. Firstly, poor children may have more opportunities to go to school thanks to financial supports from donators. Examples can be seen in many far-flung regions in Vietnam, where kids are able to study in public schools without worrying about tuition fees. In fact, this could result in them receiving better education, thus having brighter career prospects. Secondly, it is a widely-observed fact that many patients who live under poverty are suffering chronic diseases due to the scarcity of finance. This may be well lessened by financial supports from other citizens, meaning that the possibility of recovering of such sick people can be increased.
It would appear that donating money may encourage residents to cultivate their civic sense. By this we mean that by supporting the poor financially. People tend to have more sense of responsibility, as they have to save more. Indeed, this can enable many folks to spend their money more meaningfully, thereby enhancing their overall well-being/ another positive factor would be that many citizens will either learn or improve their financial management if they have to spend less. It would appear that this may equip people with right skills to avoid financial crisis later on.
In conclusion, it seems to me that spending a certain amount of salary on charity could provide people and society with many benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19572953737 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72527238744 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2988360785 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129361620327 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444998309584 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357933578072 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075228884221 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299563379847 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.