More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Socialization has been developed, which makes the people perceive change to improve their living conditions, so migrating to a metropolis is inevitable. However, city life is a challenge for newcomers. Therefore, the government should give some solutions to support them.
The more people are, the more complex the life is. The migrator will find it difficult to encounter with their problems. One of their big troubles is living conditions. The price in the city is much higher than in the rural area because the citizens have higher income while the migrator belongs to the low-income group. For that reason, they usually share the space with others in a small flat in the suburbs, some of them even live in a slum. Besides, because of a lack of knowledge and experiences, they easily accept heavy works, which may expose to toxic chemicals, for a higher salary. In some cases, they are enticed to do illegal jobs. These are most of the adversity the migrator concerned for.
To support those people, proper solutions should be allowed. The main key is raising their knowledge by job education, small talks or meetings. Besides, raising funds for updating hired houses and stable marketing place is actualization. The government also needs to control the crime rate and illegal organizations to make urban life better.
Overall, the increasing migrator to large cities become more popular and there always has a potential danger. Authority help is necessary to care for everyone's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1106557377 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67593451039 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8032268782 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3529411765 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3529411765 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337252531247 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941011569761 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850398768623 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1984273795 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434635095146 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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