Nowadays, there are an increasing number of rural migrants into metropolises looking for better living conditions, but urban life might be challenging due to a few issues.However, I believe that governments can carry out some improvements on citizens’ life.
The main problem of living in a city is that the cost of living is higher than that in rural areas. City dwellers pay higher for education, housing, and food. Another issue is that life in a city are becoming more stressful for its inhabitants. An overwhelming workload, traffic problems have placed a severe strain on citizens. Futhermore, inhabitants of a metropolis are more likely to suffer from health problems than those living in a town. In a city, there are more factories and workshops than in a village, which means that more hazardous waste leading to lung diseases is disposed every year. As a result, living in a city might be less advisable.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could relocate factories to suburbs to cut industrial pollution in urban areas. Secondly, they would implement a plan to urbanize provincial towns and rural areas, which would help to reduce city population. Thus, there will be fewer vehicles and less traffic congestion, which means that city dweller’s life would be more relaxing. The third option would be to spend money on campaigns to educate people about the importance of protecting the environment, in order to improve citizens’health.
In conclusion, governments could probably adopt a range of measures to improve city life.
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 67
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98836710423 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6351495243 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383284043163 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119754906471 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883533339289 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223400821253 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412623750133 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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