More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequence of this? What solutions can you offer?
It is a recent issue that the tendency of people who reside in agriculture land migrate to metropolitan city for the sake of seeking job. There are several problems and solutions from this tropical issue which I will elucidate more below.
Regarding the problems, farming societies move to urban areas, where this seems to be followed by young farmers. In fact, plowing and harvesting in certain seasons become heavy jobs compared to office workers, estimated with big money. In the long-term, a country will pose serious problems of local food sources and rely on imported ones. Moreover, massive migration of those people will meet the huge competitiveness of job vacancies resulting in higher unemployment of centre cities. Earning a lot of income plays crucial part to fulfil high living standard in the cities, hence, they might build illegal housings located in slump areas to reduce the monthly expenses.
Turning to an array of the solutions, the existence of advanced technologies assists farmers’ works to increase their productivity. To explicate, detection sensors of moisture and temperature measurement would preclude crops failure, thereby, the higher agricultural products are harvested, the greater peasant’ welfare and prosperity will be. In addition, the solid farmer association could keep the locals cultivating fruits and vegetable products. Take Japan as an example, the strong bonding-relationship among farmers, researchers and policymakers could encourage not only senior farmers but but also the youngs to achieve the great satisfaction from involving in this.
In conclusion, the problems of farmer migration to metropolitan city contribute the fewer farming generation and higher number of unemployment. Meanwhile, the solutions of this are advanced agricultural tools and empowered-farmer organisation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: but
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, regarding, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71272727273 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14202440401 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694545454545 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3550807753 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176220832554 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570033745188 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551141885334 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109398414323 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627638103259 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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