More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation.
Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Recently, the trend of owning or depending on a private car is rising and majority of people are using it as the main source of transportation. People born in mid 20th century, can clearly indentify the difference of owning a car, it was been a luxury and a possesion than to fufill their neccessity. Whereas, today every home has a privately owned car or motorcycle.
To begin with, having a car of our own has some benefits in terms of priacy and provides immense comfort during travel. On the contrart, it brings some devestating environmental problems, for instance, global warming, traffic, deforestation to build new roads to cope up with rising cars. Over-dependence on car use not just affects the environment but also the living beings in it. Humans face serious health issues such as a respiratory and skin illness because of exposure to the smoke released by them and also by the smog in big cities.
Environmentalist and social activist had always been cautious and warned the government, but plans and laws to reduce the drastic effects are recently formulated and followed in most of the countries. Strict regulations on car manufacuters, as well as on the consumers, monitoring the number of cars owned by a family, increasing the tax for buying new cars should be implemented, which will have positive impact. Construction of better inter city rail roads, increasing the frequency of buses , using shared vehicle and also encouraging people to use public transportation are realiable solutions
I strongly believe, bringing changes in such situations needs cooperation between government and the people. Government should be more flexible and plan for long term goals and people should follow the rules and regulations which brings prosperity for the country and the environment as a whole.
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 61
- The diagram below represents the Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011 Summarise the information given in the diagrams Write at least 150 words 70
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- WRITING Write about the following topic A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honour kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagre 78
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...tify the difference of owning a car, it was been a luxury and a possesion than to fufill...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roads, increasing the frequency of buses , using shared vehicle and also encouragi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15254237288 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0164813891 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633898305085 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1348088678 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20322576395 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742288150388 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495010114699 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111200758853 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559171050531 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.