Colossal numbers of people are depending upon the personal car as their major means of transporation. The essay would discuss the major problems which are occured because of cars and also provide appropriate solution in order to eradicate the problem.
Nowadays, numerous people are wooing towards car ownership so that they can utilize them as a daily basis transport facilities but, which can cause plenty of problems. However, fuel crisis and congestion on the road are considered as a noticable problem. When people used their individual vehicles, the demand of fuel will increase and the source of fuel is not enduring which result fuel crisis. Furthermore, if the number of car increased in the road, it would rise the traffic congestion. In addition, the rate of pollution will comparatively at peak that makes environmental degradation. For example, because of increment in quantity of car, CFCs gas produced in a environment, people suffered with hazardous diseases.
In order to assuage(mitigate) the problem of maximum number of car, it becomes necessary to promote public transport rather than private car. First of all, without sharing information of its benifits, it is not possible to allure folks towars public vehicles. What is more, they must be affortable and reliable from the perspective of security. For instance, a survey shows that public vehicles which applied CCTV cameras in order to keep evidence for future purpose are mostly feel secured while travelling.
To sum up, the dependent of public on private car is not worst idea but always used them only in the condition of urgency otherwise it will impact on environment as well as human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
Colossal numbers of people are depending upon the personal car as their major me...
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Line 2, column 667, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n quantity of car, CFCs gas produced in a environment, people suffered with hazar...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the worst'.
Suggestion: not the worst
...e dependent of public on private car is not worst idea but always used them only in the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19259259259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83200404547 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1469128087 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244345574148 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079370822274 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576240786876 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138898869792 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572491898798 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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