More and more people these days work harder and longer hour's and have no time for family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion? How is it affecting family life and the society as whole. Use relevant examples to support your view.
Lifestyle has undergone a dramatic change in this modern era. Presently, people want to live a luxurious lives. Therefore, a massive number of people are working for long hours and they are unable to spend time with their family and friends. Here, I would like to account for the causes and it's bad effects on family life and society with my own perception.
There are manifold points regarding the causes of working for long hours. First and foremost, there is a stiff competition in this hectic life on account of which they are spending their much time on work. Hence, they are not able to give time to their family. What is more, rising inflation is one of the reasons behind the long hours that people spend on their work. For instance, they work harder and earn more to manage their astronomical outlays. Thence, it affects family relations.
Furthermore, people want to uplift their standard of living. Therefore, they work harder and give less time to their families. Moreover, people secure themselves financially for the coming days. To exemplify, they work for extra hours in order to save money for their children education, marriage etc. Thence, it makes people to feel safe in their later years.
There are some demerits of working for extra hours. Initially, long time affects the family relationships. For example, people do not become able to spend time with their children owing to which they may indulge in some criminal activities. Besides this, long hours work prompts to health concerns such as tiredness, fatigue and even stress.
To recapitulate, it is well said that family is an indispensable part of every person's life. Undeniably, work is important to earn for survival. However, it is necessary for the people to spend quality time with their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99331103679 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51345302593 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518394648829 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4096178118 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.8636363636 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5909090909 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261697917391 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087403672513 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500269599946 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169399126232 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429616141341 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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