More and more people think there is no need for printed newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that nowadays, printed newspapers are not neccesary. While I agree that accessing information on the Internet is an easier way, I believe that printed newspapers still play an important roles in modern life.
On the one hand, the development of the Internet makes printed newspapers less neccesary. Nowadays, the Internet is all the rage. It is a more convenient way to access information. With a laptop or smartphone connected to internet, people can read news everywhers, whenever they want and it does not cost anything. The internet is an unlimited source of infomation which can provide up-to-date news from different countries around the world and can satisfy the curiosity of readers. This is the reasons why many newspapers and magazines have their online version beside the printed one.
On the other hand, printed newspapers still play an integral role in modern life. Articles in printed newspapers are usually written by professionals who may produce better writing than amateurs. Because of this, printed newspapers are a more truth- worthful sorce of news, compared with the internet where people are free to produce information. In addition, there are some people who may not like or unable to read news from the internet. Elderly, for instance, may not know how to use the internet to access information so that printed newspapers are the main source of information suitable for them.
In conclusion, I believe that although the internet saw a significant development, printed newspapers are still neccesary in modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.224 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84815729903 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.568158822 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125640225291 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512636591075 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382736614364 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783289967527 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351430809956 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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