More and more people today are using computers and electron it device to access information. Therefore that is no longer any need to print books magazines and newspapers oh stop to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this present era, technologies are developing on daily basis, and its use also increases in mankind. Computers and electronic device are utilized for getting information, which take a place of books, magazines, and newspapers. This essay will explain my agreement with that statement and also gives reasons behind it. That described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of drawbacks of printing paper base materials, which harm nature as well as human too. First and foremost, accessing information through books, magazines, and newspapers are extremely slow. People get news after the day or month. Furthermore, If citizens Start reading books more, then it required to manufacture more pages. That made from wood, therefore the number of trees in a forest is decline. That creates a negative impact on the environment. For example, 80% of trees were cut for making pages last year. That was written in a survey of the University of Gujarat.
Moreover, there are many benefits of using technology like phone and computer for access information. Firstly, it is financially better, because the price of e-book and e-news is less as compared to printed news and books. Secondly, it is very easy to carry. Traveller can download books and magazines on their smartphone, and they can read that at any place and in any condition whether light is available or not. For instance, the popularity of e-books and magazine rising, which is explained by Google.
To conclude, printing pages is dangerous for the world and that requires a long process, whereas technology makes that process eco-friendly and easy for the reader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the price of e-book and e-news is less as compared to printed news and books. Sec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19850187266 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76732142416 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659176029963 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0237244593 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1111111111 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178098854853 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436570208455 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434978860453 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893807417497 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518843430579 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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