More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
As the rapid global economy grows, it seems that buying famous brands with clothes, cars or other items become a trend nowadays. People are more focus on the brands of the products instead of just the prices.
I believe there are numbers of reasons that people are favour in buying goods or products with well-known brands. Firstly, most of people believe that products in famous brands have better quality and reputation. For example, Audi or BMW produce cars with elegant appearance and amusing spare parts, which are more appealing to customers than those unknown brand cars. Secondly, an incre...
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People are more focus on the brands
People are focusing more on the brands
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