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Time is changing and so the way people tend to buy new things. Nowadays more people go after luxurious brands and spend a huge amount of money to purchase their products, such as automobile, and clothing. There are some specific roots behind this social issue, and I believe that it has certain negative impacts on society.
There are two main reasons why people like to buy luxurious items. Firstly, in some countries, buying expensive good shows higher social status. To put it differently, people believe that the more they buy high-priced products, the more they can show them off to others. Take Iran, which is the largest importer of expensive items in the world, as the most patently obvious example; in 2017, the Iranian spend approximately 1.8 billion dollars on purchasing luxurious automobiles, and clothing. Secondly, we can put the blame on celebrities. That is to say, celebrities, who are a role model for many young people, advertise different expensive brands on their social media. By the means of advertising these brands, they persuade young people to buy their items.
In my opinion, the drawbacks of this phenomenon outweigh its profits, and surely have some destructive effects on the society. First thing first, it causes wealth inequality between people. In other words, by the means of buying overpriced items, the rich will become richer and poor people will become poorer. Another impact on the society is that other brands will go bankrupt. More specifically, cannot sell their products, other brands will make insolvent.
In conclusion, although there are some reasons why these days more people are buying luxurious brand matters; from my perspective, it has destructive impacts on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64289333952 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4243447256 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229530412661 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706673074611 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504969425904 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145294099104 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159220056183 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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