More and more people work from home and student will study at home if computer technologies become cheap and accessible What will be the advantages and disadvantages will happen?
Nowadays there is an increasing number of workers and students indulging in home-based education and working thanks to the accessibility and affordability of cutting edge technology. This tendency may have both the advantage and adverse effects on the individuals
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for the easiness and convenient that work from home brings. First of all, it can help in saving a great deal of time. There seem to be shreds of evidence that commuting takes up a large part in the daily schedule of an average officer or pupil. Traffic congestion, which became a nerve-racking issue in several metropolia, can be a good case in point. Furthermore, numerous chauffeurs found it difficult to have adequate concentrate after a weary working or studying day, which is principally responsible for the traffic pile-up. In the second place, the residence can be an effective and ideal workplace. It is irrefutable that by working from home people can prevent the distraction from other colleges and schoolfellows. An illustration of this is that various enterprises are reconstructing their department with the aim of avoiding the noisiness
Nevertheless, the adverse side of home-based working or studying should not be underestimated. First and foremost, it degraded numerous important abilities. Communication, presentation or cooperation within an organization or class, to mention but a few, are reportedly not experienced enough when people working from home as a result of the shortage of meeting face to face. Therefore, people working or studying from home are believed to be suffered from loneliness, which even led to depression. Secondly, there are several occupations that cannot be working from home. Shipping profession, which workplace stretches on every route, can be an appropriate case in point
To summarize, working or studying from home may have benefits such as time-saving from commuting or prevent distraction but it also contains several disadvantages such as skills degradation. Moreover, many jobs cannot be done from home
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, as a result, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40307692308 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23106225777 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4914179174 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251579737748 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934282939361 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677587867349 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164335393511 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047109249214 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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