Nowadays, many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. why do you think it happens?what are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice
It is undoubtedly true that people these days prefer eating processed food rather than preparing a traditional meal on their own. This tendency resulted from several reasons. Consequently, It has both benefits as well as drawbacks
To begin with, there is a variety of explanations for such a choice. First of all is the easy availability of ready-made foods. Along with the growth of numerous franchises including Burger King or pizza hut, People nowadays apparently may find fast-food joints in every corner of the world. In the second place, the convenience and quickness of processed food should not be underestimated. These kinds of food are short-ordered and can be devoured swiftly when compared to hand-made meals. Furthermore, cleaning up after eating is also expeditious which is quite suitable for the hectic people who always up to their ears.
Precooked foods have many advantages. Firstly, these foods may save a great deal of time due to its rapidity. It appears to be some evidence that snack food has become a savior of the modern citizen. This is shown by eating junk foods helping officers to have enough time to take a nap without skipping meals. Secondly, fast-foods have a reasonable price so everyone can afford to buy it. By way of illustrations, it only takes an average of one dollar for a hamburger or a fried chicken wing.
Nevertheless, there are drawbacks that canned food brings. The first disadvantage is the inadequate sanitation. It appears to be shreds of evidence that prepackaged food often contains a large amount of fat, sodium and other artificial sweeteners. Having excessive consumption of junk food is reportedly detrimental to health and responsible for disorders. Obesity, stroke or diabetes, to name but a few. Secondly, eating fast-food loosen family bonding. Due to the rapidness of the meal, the time spent cooking and chatting will be reduced to the maximum. Thus, it may be the underlying cause of some mental diseases like depression or social anxiety
Overall, The easy availability of ready meals and its celerity make fast food outperform the home-made food. Although it has many benefits as time-saving or reasonable price, it also brings several drawbacks namely its harmful to health and brings down the family time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as, first of all, to begin with, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89331742085 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599462365591 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4085092666 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5652173913 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1739130435 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95652173913 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151915655934 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435620077866 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301968749521 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852458372628 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272010969485 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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