More and more plastic waste has polluted cities countryside and oceans .what problem does it cause and what measure can be taken?
Environmental issues are rising day by day at an alarming rate .Urban areas ,rural areas and water bodies are being badly affected by increasing plastic waste . It causes many hurdles such as health hazards and reduces quality of soil . I will discuss effects of this trend along with their solution in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with ,there is plethora of obstacles which are caused by plastic waste. First and foremost is health hazards .To explicate, large amount of plastics are present on the sides of the road as a garbage .Many insects and mosquitoes breed and feed there .These mosquitoes cause Malaria and Dengue .If people burn this plastic waste, it release noxious gases which leads to respiratory problems such as Asthma. Moreover, water logging is also occurred by this plastic waste .Plastic is non bio-degradable, it takes long time to decompose .It blocks drainage system and cause water logging.
Is there any solution to solve this problem? Yes it can be tackled by taking some approprplastic.medies. Authorities should start programmes to aware people and should ban on use of plastics.People should use eco friendly alternative instead of plastic.For instance ,few years ago people started use cloth bags and jute bags rather than plastic polythene and plastic waste is reduced by 30%. Government should put restrictions on the use of plastic and put penalties on people who use plastic.
To conclude ,plastic waste leads to many problems like health problems such as Dengue Malaria and Asthma and water blockage problems. Despite these effects, it can we combat by starting programmes and making strict rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80221405261 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.7072020589 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164780760024 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633846807585 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295948099387 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101580207012 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201689538034 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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