Nowadays more and more people do online shopping what are the reasons.I discuss advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.
People are interested in shopping .In this modern era several individuals prefer shopping via Internet as compared to beyond times
There are various reason behind this trend as online shopping save time of masses and give variety of products .I will discuss benefits and demerits of this in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason of this is it saves time .To explicate people are busy in their work,they do not have enough time to go market and buy things .So, they like shopping via internet . They just select the item on the mobile phone or computer and after two or three days shipping man gives the goods at their home. Moreover, there is a large variety of goods on the internet. Online shopping sites like Amazon and Flipkart are global based and products are sold on international level and different types of things are available on these sites. This type of shopping also give discounts Therefore online shopping attracted people most.
However, despite these advantages there are some disadvantages of online shopping like it is difficult to examine the quality of prodthis, In other words, in the photos products look good while in the real ,quality of product is cheap.Sometimes, things are not of size. Besides this, sometimes things are not that which people bought. Shipping agents do work carelessly and exchange the goods.
In conclusion ,although there are some cons like quality difference and careless behaviour of shipping agents, pros are more. It saves time of people and also give different kind of product. It also saves money by giving discounts on the products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53677087895 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.6984376883 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28632113465 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891776338011 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844037583947 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151254502271 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475700053664 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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