More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like
engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor
countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
Actually, I believe I can be in this qualified people category. Because I am a Manufacturing Engineer and I am
looking master programmes in other country and after this I will start seeking job on there.
I believe that, it is not good for poor countries but these countries must do something to keep their specialist. For
example in my country even you are qualified on some area maybe you can not find any job. Even you find any job
your salary is not fair enough for your skills and maybe you can not live alone with this salary. When it is
happened, people are looking to do something else.
Of course it is not all about money but when your life quality is low, you can not gonna be happy so easily. In some
poor countries, people are working more than fifty-five hours and six days in a week. When you work six days in a
week you will have very small time to rest your mind and body. For these areas mind health is so important. When
your mind is not ready for next week you can not give one hundred percent yourself for job. But rich countries
knows that and they are always thinking how can we make them more comfortable.
I support that, these movements are making rich countries more richer and poor countries more poor. I am strongly
agree with “this is only part of the natural movement of workers alone the world”.
- In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas likeengineering, computing and medicine.Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poorc 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Looking
... am a Manufacturing Engineer and I am looking master programmes in other country and ...
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...mething to keep their specialist. For example in my country even you are qualified on...
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...t find any job. Even you find any job your salary is not fair enough for your skil...
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...ou can not live alone with this salary. When it is happened, people are looking to...
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...ve alone with this salary. When it is happened, people are looking to do something els...
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Suggestion: go
...n your life quality is low, you can not gonna be happy so easily. In some poor coun...
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...not gonna be happy so easily. In some poor countries, people are working more than...
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...eas mind health is so important. When your mind is not ready for next week you can...
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... yourself for job. But rich countries knows that and they are always thinking how c...
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Message: Use only 'richer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: richer
...ese movements are making rich countries more richer and poor countries more poor. I am stro...
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...or countries more poor. I am strongly agree with 'this is only part of the nat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, may, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56451612903 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32847803588 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1235129604 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.8571428571 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207492606268 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840066552859 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925393098214 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077827972219 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079740329921 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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