In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Do you agree or disagree?
Actually i disagree with this idea. It is not easy to product something useful or good. For example; in most countries, people can not reach the technology if they are not going to buy a these multinational companies products. When you did not reach the technology then you can not product goods useful for this century.
Some people say these companies are just forcing people to buy their products with advertising. But it is quite normal for me. When you product something useful you have to believe your product and you should make a huge advertisement. Otherwise no one can find and they can not buy your products.
I believe that some products are very useful for daily life. For example Apple is a multinational company and they are producted Apple Watch. When people get this watch, they can see their blood pressure, heart health etc. Some of the countries permiting to buy other countries products. Apple is American company and Huawei is Chinese company. Goverment of China is permitted to buy Apple’s products. They are in a technology war right now. But it is not a bad war. They are forcing themself to product better goods. Samsung did same watch with Apple and then they forced Apple to product new and better watch.
In conclusion, it is undoubtedly true we can not resist with technology. Multinational companies can reach technology so easily and then they can product useful goods. These products are seriously raising our quality of life.
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas likeengineering, computing and medicine.Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poorc 56
- In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95582329317 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64945819285 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477911646586 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4442746054 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.7619047619 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8571428571 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.61904761905 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179017162242 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602007327898 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605203104455 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128017041709 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235153649044 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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