More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
More and more students have travelled abroad to study at college and university these days even though they might experience some bottlenecks in a foreign country. In my opinion, studying abroad can bring about much more benefits for students compared to any drawbacks it might bring.
Admittedly, there are a few drawbacks of studying abroad. Firstly, living away from home can be challenging because some students have to find accommodation themselves and pay the bills monthly without financial support from their family. Secondly, a number of students may experience culture shock due to the huge differences between the two countries. These troubles also cause their homesick feeling and anxiety, which influences their academic performance. Another issue is the language barrier which discourages students from social interactions. A minority of students, for instance, may find it difficult to express themselves in a foreign language as well as understand the native speaker' slang.
Nevertheless, despite the drawbacks above, I believe that studying abroad can bring about far more benefits for students. The main benefit is that students can choose to study at a prestigious university. Obviously, the best universities will employ lecturers who are experts in their field. Therefore, qualifications gained in a top-ranking university abroad can help students open doors to better job opportunities. Another benefit is that living in another country can broaden students' horizons. For example, overseas students are exposed to different cultures and customs, so they are likely to have a better understanding of the new area, the cultures as well as local residents. In addition, students abroad can immerse themselves in a foreign language. As a result, they can speak a new language naturally without much effort.
In conclusion, better job opportunities, updated knowledge, and international experience far outweigh any minor disadvantages that could result from studying abroad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...best universities will employ lecturers who are experts in their field. Therefore, qual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65448504983 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03891748506 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1377657242 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388073288649 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126495408912 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128641071286 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247385992683 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157069806215 0.056905535591 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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