Nowdays, it is popular to go other region for furthur study which, is a highly controversial issue among students and their parents. There is no doubt that its benefits are more than problems.
To embark with, the major benefit is facilties. In other words, forgein nation provide all type amenities because every student first preference is facility. All students have needs for all amenities because if authority give best facilities so, the students do their work or study properly. Nowdays people needs are rising day by day due to the reason of facility. For example, a survey was conducted in 2015 and authority obtain 70% students moved in foreign country for their education because they give best facilities. In addition, when any undergraduate go to other nation and in this nation they have no any family so, a student can made himself independent and learn how to manage life without family support. As a result, the students learn new things with the help of himself.
Another reason, the education system of foreign nation is very popular because they hire knowledgable staff for students. When a student take education properly so, the chances of job oppournity has been increased and they can get job very easily. On the other hand, if any pearson go abroad and learn new culture, meet with new people so, they think the culture and rule of other nation is very powerful and they lost their culture. It give bad effect on indian culture.
In conclusion, although they have some problems to go abroad for their education but the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. I agree with this because it is a golden chance for their bright future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
... for all amenities because if authority give best facilities so, the students do their wo...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
...ountry for their education because they give best facilities. In addition, when any under...
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Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...her nation and in this nation they have no any family so, a student can made himse...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...owerful and they lost their culture. It give bad effect on indian culture. In con...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49077635221 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6607615311 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147188587298 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518688628865 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467949066373 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982064079623 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510455903506 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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