More and more wild animals are in the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
An increasing number of wild animals have become endangered with some of them in the verge of extinction. The reasons are many. Some species are prone to danger due to various natural phenomena while the rest are by human intervention. This essay will focus on threat to wild life due to global warming and deforestation and possible solutions for the same.
The primary cause of threat to the once diverse wildlife on this planet is the disruption of the environmental equilibrium. The average temperature on earth has had significant increase since past few years which in turn affected the wildlife across the entire geography including the poles. The raise in temperature lead to melting of polar ice and a raise in ocean level. As the water level continue to raise, wild animals such as arctic fox, penguins see imminent danger. One of the main reasons of global warming is human intervention which involves burning of fuels, increased emission of carbon dioxide from many vehicles, releasing large amount of CFC gases to the atmosphere which leads to damage of ozone layer which in turns traps more heat and harmful radiation from the sun. In the recent forest fires in Australia, we have witnessed a concerning number of endangered animals succumbed to death. This shows the imminent danger which is not far away.
Another major threat to wild animals is deforestation. With hardly any food and shelter, these animals have no choice but to surrender to the greed of the modern world. Loss of natural habitat compel the animals to leave their natural habitat and move to urban areas where they endure unfavorable conditions.
We can tackle this situation mainly by being sensible to nature. We need to spread the importance of protecting the green cover. Organizing awareness campaigns and other eco-friendly initiatives will help to retain the wild life. By reducing the use of plastics as well as dumping of plastic waste in to the oceans can save many precious marine species from extinction. Controlling the exponential increase of motor vehicles will have a positive impact in reducing temperature. Switching to electric vehicles will be a great step. We are the ones responsible for the survival of the planet. Therefore, we should act wisely, take every possible and practical measure to protect the planet and precious wildlife.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11658031088 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70697993011 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585492227979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8167272541 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7727272727 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186525472964 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495325972632 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435427043118 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102347018129 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318829313597 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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