An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation.
Nowadays, a significant number of highly educated professionals such as doctors, engineers and teachers from poorer countries prefer to pursue higher education and opportunities in developed countries leaving their own country. This may lead to shortage of highly skilled professionals in home country. The reason for migrating to a foreign country is mainly because they observe diminishing of quality education in their home country in contrast to an increase in quality of life in developed countries. This essay will discuss how the country’s economy and Industrial sectors are affected due to this and counter measures such as improving education standards and infrastructure which helps to retain highly educated professionals.
Firstly, it is the occupations that need special skills to suffer the worst. For example, in recent times, a concerning number of people are diagnosed with cancer and doctors specialized in oncology are not easily available. Situation is similar in the case of technology where there is a shortage of expert engineers, scientists and researchers whose unparalleled capabilities that lead to innovation and excellence in the respective fields. Another impact would be to the economy, where a huge amount of tax the government could have otherwise received from these highly salaried professionals. There are also industries that deals with luxury where the main focus is on the high net worth individuals which mostly are either businessmen or highly salaried professionals.
The primary solution to this problem would be to ensure quality education right from the early stages of the educational curriculum where one is motivated and driven in the right direction. Secondarily, Improvising infrastructure and other facilities will encourage people to stay back as it would be easy to hold back people who already have a sense of belonging to their motherland. Country should also try to bring more job opportunities for specialized and rare skills. This will also help in giving highly qualified professionals a second thought before they decide to give up the comfort of living close to their loved ones.
Often, it is this bunch of skilled professional who make the nation economically stable and competent among other developed nations. When these people see that home country can offer them a better life and much more-what they always dreamt of, It brings down the rate of migration to developed countries up to an extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 657, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...stries that deals with luxury where the main focus is on the high net worth individuals wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, for example, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4481865285 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02471874081 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562176165803 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4759568728 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.2 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259126292895 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742616413699 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611911559506 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14247248486 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778724406299 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.