More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on endangered list. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that over the years, there is an increasing number of some animal species that are going to extinct and others that are getting threatened. This problem could be ascribed to various reasons such as overexploitation and the destruction of the natural environment. However, there are some workable solutions can be drawn to tackle this issue.
It is possibly said that this issue may be caused by some main factors. One of the prominent reasons concerning this problem is overexploitation, especially, illegal hunting and poaching are still a big problem. Since people are greedy and often want to make as much money as possible, they use wild animal as material to produce luxurious products which are highly profitable. For instance, skin, fur and tusks of certain animals are used for creating fashion accessories like coats, bags and also for illegal trading. Another factor leading to this situation is the destruction of natural habitats. When the population of the countries is burgeoning as such a fast pace that more land is required for creating more settlement space for them. It has lead to the clearance of the forest areas and the loss of habitat of the fauna. By doing so, many animals and plants which lived in untouched nature have to look out for new homes, or they will be in danger of becoming extinct.
In truth, some imperative measures ought to be taken to resolve these prospective issue. Imposing new regulations and investing in more conservation areas be highly recommended for this problem. It is proven to give more benefits in the edge of extinction of some species and some animals on the endangered lists. For example, the government should clearly blur the boundaries, where human intervention be allowed and reserve a specified area for the habitat of near-to-extinction wild animals, moreover, there should be a complete ban on killing animals for the hunters and the sake of human desires. Furthermore, it is high time to raise awareness of the public about the significance of the flora and fauna in our environment. A TV programs that can motivate people to preserve wildlife ad not to use products made up of them, as a result, disappearance of wild creatures can be controlled.
In conclusion, although overexploitation and the deterioration of the environment are blame for animal extinction, there are still feasible measures. By imposing new regulations and investing in more national parks as well as raising awareness, the government can eliminate the issue from its root.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07194244604 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99593622786 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541966426859 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9885351727 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.315789474 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68421052632 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363244747698 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100211390863 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058992704532 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212191847498 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649193395211 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.