In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In today’s modern world, it is true that there is a number of overweight people is on the rise, while the levels of health problems witnessed a rapid decline and all of them has become a serious problem in many nations. From my perspective, poor eating habits and the low levels of physical activity are responsible for this problem, however there are not without workable solutions to address it.
It is possibly said that this issue may be caused by some main factors. One of the prominent reasons concerning these problems is when the pace of life is so fast and there are more and more fast food shops appear on the streets and people have a tendency to buy prepackaged foods to finish meals quickly than spending time preparing home-made dishes. However, most of the processed food contains high levels of unhealthy and nutritional ingredients. Another contributing factor to mention is that most individuals lack physical exercises in their daily life, instead they tend to overuse private cars and the other means of public transportation whilst they were quite used to travelling by bicycle or on foot in the past. Moreover, most of us choose to go home and rest after work instead of going to the park or the gym to exercise. As a result, it leads to the fact that people are getting fatter and fatter and their health will have some problems.
In truth, some imperative measures should be taken to resolve these prospective issues. Following a healthy and balance diet and doing exercise regularly to form good habits are two solutions highly recommended to reduce obesity rate and enable people keep fit easier. It is also advisable for the government to improve public awareness by promoting balance lifestyles in media while children should be educated from an early age about how essential it is to have a good health by participate in regular outdoor activities and follow healthy diet.
In conclusion, although consuming too much ready-made food and low levels of physical activities are the main causes of overweight and health problems, some feasible measures should be taken in consideration. By following a healthy diet and doing exercise regularly, people can prevent themselves from becoming obese.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended reducing'.
Suggestion: recommended reducing
...rm good habits are two solutions highly recommended to reduce obesity rate and enable people keep fit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02156334232 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68865188564 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582210242588 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4586789617 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.307692308 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5384615385 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219079086479 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761594538539 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539045446905 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131203652345 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022300630289 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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