More developing countries are given aid from international organisations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important.
Now a days, many International Organisations and various government bodies of developed countries are providing financial funds to developing nations. These aids are always acts as a blessing for the people of the nation, but we must consider advices & practical aid are more important than economical aid only.
To commence with, we must know that many countries are suffering from terrorist attacks one of them is Syria. Many developed nations are providing funds on a regular basis to those nations but somehow they are unable to monitor their funds, various journalist/ authors have mentioned in their articles that most of the funds are being used by terrorist groups because of the corrupt government officials. The rate of Infrastructure/refugee camps developments is very poor because there are no government monitoring authorities who can monitor and guide others about the usage of funds.
Moreover, various African countries are receiving funds from powerful nations even after that common people are dying from hunger and numerous diseases. Maximum percentage of funds are being used by authorities and corrupt officials of the nation. After receiving millions of dollars as aid, basic items such as Food and water are not being provided, number of Doctor's are not enough to treat those who are suffering from various diseases. These situations seriously called for practical aid.
To conclude, I must say that in order to completely eradicate the suffering of those nations and to create better infrastructure, we also need practical aid and advices from various governing organisations/ developed nations.
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46825396825 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98233327068 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0554378972 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309405786206 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120951826187 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952188246979 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210442566335 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133916758299 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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