The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Crime rate is increasing dramatically nowadays. In fact, in maximum number of crimes youngsters are involved. However, blaming parents and their parental skills for this behavior is not wise. Actually, somehow both children and guardians are equally responsible for the upbringing of children.
To commence with, we need to understand the reasons behind crimes, conducted specially by younger generation. There are numerous factors such as basic needs are not being fulfilled, deprived of proper education, and environment at home is not suitable such as arguments or physical violence between mother and father. For instance, one of my batch mate attempted to kill his father after he became mentally disturbed because his father used to beat his mother after drinking alcohol. Later on he was sent to juvenile prison. In order to prevent such incidents parents must have to maintain a positive and peaceful environment at home.
Furthermore, most of the time parents are unable to fulfill the basic requirements of children due to multifarious reasons such as financial instability than it is the responsibility of every child to understand that they always have to support their parents and avoid joining bad companies which may lead to crime world. Moreover, children are drinking at early age and in many cases they start taking drugs and after that they start committing crimes to fulfill their requirements. For example, in one of the survey conducted by child welfare department depicts that children who belong to poor families are more involved in criminal activities. To solve this problem government should take some necessary actions such as provide free education and conduct some motivational seminars for youngsters.
To recapitulate, it is responsibility of every individual to perform his job properly as a parent or as a child. We must avoid violence which somewhere affects the mind set of kids and make sure that they should not get involve with criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30793650794 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86193601476 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5105020335 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149824361994 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516936489272 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644744278298 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973750094795 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516645562741 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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