More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?

Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

With the number of working women soaring in our contemporary society, higher number of couples decide to have children in their later stages than in the past. There are numerous factors which latent in the past but are more evident now. There are some advantages of it which overwhelms the present disadvantages.

In earlier stages, women were thought to be confined only towards household workers and rarely got opportunities to work in outside fields along with men. In these circumstances, having a child in early age seemed plausible, where the sole worker was less involved in raising the children but more occupied in earning for his family. This was the accepted norms of earlier times, but our modern world has gone through a drastic change where women are now considered equally responsible and corollary of an action are deliberated before pursuing it.

Nowadays, people are more aware and savvy enough to judge their circumstances. They often tend to have a child when there is stability and enough wealth to take care of a child's health and his education. Such thoughts were missing in the past, where people were more moved by carrying on their ancestor's name than the necessities of a growing child.

Independence of couples has also been a reason in today's time to shift this time of having a child to a later stage in life. There were peer pressure of families and societies to start their family, even if there was no means of wages in the household. Such temperament of society has also gone through series of vigorous change and now accepts the decisions of a person to find a suitable time on his own.

In a nutshell, it has eventually benefited the child who is born at a later stage when there are basic facilities and requirements and enough wealth to help him grow up, sharpen his prudence and carry on this contemplation.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...udence and carry on this contemplation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88050314465 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64676962029 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7705882152 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247891078476 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082267055012 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682274101456 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128348210134 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782078333726 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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