The trend of giving birth to child at more mature age, after 30, is commonly observed among majority of people. The only demerit of this raising trend is age factor; however, in my perspective, its merits are far more in terms of financial support for better take care of their children and parents have enough life experience.
The primitive drawback of late parenting is the age limit. Owing to the fact that more age of women is considered as a weak point to give birth to a child, there are various changes takes place in women’s body after 30 which impact on the stages of pregnancy. Therefore, the population of new generation will be declined. To cite an example, a survey conducted by health Organization in the USA, in 2016, revealed that in America 80% women were faced pregnancy complications after the older age.
Nevertheless, maturity among the parents is crucial to fulfil their young’s needs. This is because, at the older age, both parents are well settled and earn enough money to support their family, they are able to plan for children, and at this stage parents have relaxation from the burden of settle-down and to be career-oriented; resultantly, a well earning parents will give better education to the child, for their future development.
Besides money needs, life experience is considered as the other vital factor for the decision of late child birth. Since mother and father have faced different situations in their life time, they become knowledgeable, or they learnt so many lessons from their failures and can apply this for their better life. Hence, not only parents are acquired information for their development, but also they will give better lifestyle and lessons to their offspring.
In conclusion, while the only disadvantage of children at matures age is raising changes in the women’s body. I am convinced that its benefits supersede the drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d parents have enough life experience. The primitive drawback of late parenting is...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ave faced different situations in their life time, they become knowledgeable, or they lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03492063492 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74237576611 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6946908792 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187134020279 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649713865498 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517056989257 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111695281248 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353018276695 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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