Holiday is a time to get rid of stressful work and to go somewhere else to enjoy and to spend time. There are different choices of people who prefer to spend time at one place whereas others choose to travel and discover new things from other country. In this essay, I shall discuss both perspectives.
Let us throw some light on the first opinion about going outside. First of all, people get information about the culture and traditions of other people while talking to them and it makes them able to spend more time. In this way, the cultural values are raised between two people. Secondly, if visitors go outside, then new places are easily explored by loops and bounds and even taste the other country food. Furthermore, multiple languages are learnt which every now and then applied to various places. Additionally, it is good for people who want to work abroad. To add more to it, the free time is utilized in a better manner to learn, discover and to gain about new things. Above all this things, the mental zone become broaden.
On the other hand, it is well known fact that all flowers are not in one garden which means everything is not at one place. So, hotels are also good place to spend time. Firstly, people can relax theirselves by living in a room. They enjoy their time in free space without any disturbance as well as do other things at one place. For instance, reading a book in a room and meditation which boosts mind and health. Imagination and aloneness both go hand in hand. So who wants to write and to learn, a peaceful hotel room is the bestest way. Last but not least, there are also other things to do in hotels such as swimming pool, separate dinner with music, yoga classes and many more. Along with this, in some countries there are country tradition based hotels that give full look of the country.
Hammering the final nail, it can be concluded that it banks on the personal choices and situation. In my point of view, people should select holiday by their needs as on family holiday, outside is better whereas if stressful time then needs a single place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...re, multiple languages are learnt which every now and then applied to various places. Additionally...
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Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...and to gain about new things. Above all this things, the mental zone become broaden....
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...is the bestest way. Last but not least, there are also other things to do in hotels such as swimming...
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Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ressful time then needs a single place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57446808511 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27201766773 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8302932915 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191058666575 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530726808104 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471328444962 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118983499443 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024215341945 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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